Thread:Suomynona404/@comment-33059270-20171009233217/@comment-29417957-20171010143708

It contained the overused cliche for a Lost-Episode/Video Game Pasta with a demon hiding inside a VHS/DVD and threatening to hurt/curse/kill the protagonist.

This concept has been used over and over again to the point where it lacks originality and fails to frighten the reader.

If you want to write a Demon/Devil creepypasta, I suggest you look at the Demon/Devil category on the Creepypasta Wiki.

Read the most popular stories in that category so you can get a general idea of a Demon/Devil pasta should be written. However, please don't plagriaize off of those stories. Use them for inspiration.

Writing one is difficult because it's hard to come up with something besides: I WILL KILL YOU AND TAKE YOUR SOUL AND/OR CURSE YOU MWAHAHAHAHA!

However, it is possible.