Thread:Suomynona404/@comment-33290448-20171126172704/@comment-29417957-20171127195121

I'm sorry, but it did not, so I had to delete it.

Your pasta contained the typical Lost-Episode cliches of a character buying a lost episode where a character randomly kills another character. This concept has been done literally hundreds of times, and fails to add anything new to the Lost-Episode genre.

In addition, most of your story was a massive block of text. (Otherwise known as "Wall of Text.")  It was very difficult to read.

I suggest you check out the Help category if you want to write a better pasta.