Talk:Sonic the Hedgehog Lost Episode/@comment-4889874-20180517181516

Honestly I loved this story. It was well made, had a very original story line to it, and didn't go into the usual clices of most "Lost Episode" Creepypastas. This story actually had me hooked from the first sentence to the last. Really good job, and I hope you keep writing dude! Your story was amazing, and don't let anyone get the best of you. However, if I did have one thing to criticise about this story, it would be the way that the sentences are put together. There seems to be a few grammatical errors (like lowercased words, run on sentences, and periods not being placed in the right place. Other than that, it was a very good story. I hope one day to see more of your work. Keep it up!

Story: 10/10

Grammer 8/10

Concept/Plot: 9/10

Originality: 9/10

Overal Report: 9.5/10