Thread:Suomynona404/@comment-33066960-20170917202019/@comment-29417957-20170918041305

Here are the issues:

1. A lost episode of the characters being murdered has become an overused cliche to the point where hundreds of Lost-Episode pastas use it. Other cliches include suicide and writing a bloody message on the wall. The cliches fail to make the pasta scary.

2. The story lacks creative writing. It describes the characters' deaths in a very generic and plain fashion. For example: "Jerry was lying there dead, soaked in blood." The sentence will only scare little kids.

3. The story is not unusual for Happy Tree Friends. A Lost-Episode pasta is supposed to explore the abnormal part of a show. Happy Tree Friends has real episodes of the characters randomly killing each other. The story fails to identify the lost episode as something abnormal, as the show uses murder and graphic violence in episodes that are known to exist.

The pasta fails to meet the Quality Standards because of overused cliches, lazy writing, and failing to create the feel of a good Lost-Episode pasta.