Talk:"The Loud House X"/@comment-2601:603:4C80:1CF2:6952:C871:BEAD:3FB3-20190603002237

yeah this is really cliche, one screen shot looks really bad, ( like photoshop bad. ) but one screen shot looks kinda good, but looks traced, but the grammer looks good. but someone edited this story, so that might explain why some are there, but they said there apologies so i want you to forgive them for that, there were probably just trying to make it better. but ether way nice grammer, but too many cliches, the story isn't good, but i bet you can improve from this.