Thread:Suomynona404/@comment-185.53.155.223-20170604071313/@comment-29417957-20170604185956

The pasta is incredibly short, and contains cliches of bloodshot eyes and a character killing another while screaming profanity. Aslo, the story is not scary.

My score: 0/10.

I'm sorry, but I will not improve the story until the cliches are removed and the story is rewritten to make it scary.