Talk:The Fairly Oddparents: Fairy Idol (Alternate Version)/@comment-2601:603:4C80:1CF2:E481:BEEE:2BE8:47E9-20190710024607

there are some cliches, sentence structure needs a fix, and a character instert.. is not nassary for a story like this. i would maybe look at examples, and take some english classes. or look at grammer webstites. and remember righter, always improve!