Talk:AAAHH!!! Real Monsters - The Final Scare/@comment-25262576-20161211002700

if his friend had actually taken Latin in high school, and had a strong enough handle on the language to be able to instantly translate and repeat each phrase in English -- which would be damn impressive considering I too took Latin in high school, and received a perfect 7 on the very rigorous International Baccalaureate curriculum, and that would be way beyond my abilities -- he would be in stitches over the fact that none of the monsters have even the simplest grasp of Latin grammar, and would occasionally just insert English words. I copied and pasted the passage below, with the Latin translated, to demonstrate my point. I removed the random English words, from the phrases themselves, and included parenthetical explanations.

Oblina uttered something under her breath, sounding like “Now is it of turn to I arrive,” (with the English word "had" placed between "to" and "I arrive"). Krumm nodded and added “Now is it of turn to formerly onward in it abyss.” Ickis then shakily whispered “Now is it of turn we I die,” (with the English word "must" placed between "we" and "I die"). Zimbo laughed sadistically, “Now we I will be the end many I drive!” (with the English word "of" placed between "end" and "many").

So I'll do you a favor: Comment what the Latin was supposed to say, and I'll translate it for you. That way, you can edit the story to include Latin that is actually comprehensible.