Thread:PokesquishyYT/@comment-33542393-20171105171644/@comment-29417957-20171107052055

I read your Sonic X Episode 81 pasta, and while the writing is good, I'm afraid that it doesn't meet the Quality Standards either.

The story contained the typical Lost-Episode cliches of a character being demonic and killing all of the other characters. (In a similar manner to Sonic.exe.)

Also, the satanic references feel out of place, as if it was just added for shock value. Hitler's suicide and 9/11 have nothing to do with the episode, even if they are dark.

I am closing this thread, as I feel it is starting to stretch a little long. If you have any further questions about writing a creepypasta, please contact me on my message wall or check out the pages in the Help category.