Thread:Suomynona404/@comment-26067056-20170708193606/@comment-26067056-20170709223304

Hey can you give me constructive criticism on my latest story "Spongebob and the Cave (Lost Nick Short 2002".

http://geosheas-lost-episodes.wikia.com/wiki/Spongebob_and_The_Cave_(Lost_Short_2002)#comm-38739