Thread:Pyschopasta/@comment-36215291-20180725172931/@comment-31790225-20180725201747

I don't think it's "Bad", but it needs some more detail, like for instance, in "Split Personality": I wrote down some emotion for the characters, and that's what made it so unsettling and good, I put in some Emotion in the story.

What I'm saying is, it's gotta come from Within.