Thread:Suomynona404/@comment-33576471-20171106182016/@comment-29417957-20171107044224

Your pasta failed to meet the Standards Quality Standards.

Your story contained the typical Lost-Episode cliche of a character going insane and killing all of the other characters. This cliche is random violence which fails to add anything new to the Lost-Episode genre.

In addition, a couple of the pictures you uploaded were in poor quality. (Blocky, pixelated lines and shapes.)   Anyone looking at the pictures could tell they were edited by you. No offense, but some of the pictures look like you used Microsoft Paint to edit them.

Also, it appears you ripped off Max and Ruby 0004 by adding the catchphrase, "DEATH IS OUR ONLY RELEASE."

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