Talk:The THX Test/@comment-44518957-20191229230127

The gammar in this story is great/fine.. But there is some words or one that didn't get fix.. Like "peopl." I think that should be an example to always read over your stories.. Also.. The cliches. Like.. "Death note/THX logo.." Like, I know a sound can hurt someone.. But I think it's a little hard to believe Disney would do this if people broke the rules at Disney World/Land. :0/ Like.. I think those things would get people kicked out, or end up in jail for only 3 hours, or something to kick them out.. But a sound. I mean.. It's an interesting concept, but I just find unbelievable (at least for me.) I think there should be some fixs to this story to make it bit more better.