Talk:Microphone's Origin/@comment-44494070-20191211053646

Oh no, This has so many clichés, this is a story ripping off many other stories, like Bob The Builder: Lost Episode, Shrek: Directors Cut and many more.. I am not chewing on you, this is criticism, The grammar was bad, the spelling was bad, the story was bad, and overall, the entire story itself was bad, 2/10 in my opinion.