Thread:Biondipastas/@comment-40020221-20191128220513

I know you probably won't see this message, but I need to give you some advice on your writing. Please learn to shorten your paragraphs. They're so fricking long you practically wrote an entire novel for just one paragraph. If you continue on like this people like me will lose interest in your stories because there's too much stuff. I'm not saying this to be mean. Just giving you some advice :) 