Talk:Horrid Henry: The Ashton Disaster/@comment-44031435-20191007192216

Ok, I'll be honest with you. This is a mixed bag. On one hand, it does have somewhat of a neat premise about the episode itself, but on the other hand, it's not really executed right(heck, some bits of the grammar made me absolute cringe). Overall, a not that good creepypasta with some wasted potential. I suggest you try to improve on the story more if you will.