Talk:Lost Marvel Movie: Part II/@comment-38560164-20190727042110

So coming off of Part 1 of this lost "movie" pasta i gotta admit this story overall was really great. Like with part 1 the grammar is once again amazing and effort you put into the second part does show. Maybe it's just me but I'm a sucker for a little bit of action in these kinds of stories so long as the action doesn't overtake the story as a whole.

Now as for my feelings on the dead bodies in this story: well it's complicated. I don't actually mind the blood here mainly due to the context of the situation it is presented in. Most people often criticize the usage of blood in these kind of stories cause it is often used as shock value or a cheap scare, but here the placement of it makes sense. Like with what i mentioned back in part 1 all of this was done by a man with a deep hatred of the current version of the Marvel Cinematic Universe and due to his declining mental health it does seem like he would resort to the most extreme methods of getting his way. That's why i think the usage of blood actually works in this case. Had it been thrown in for shock i would've probably docked several points on the story, but thankfully it didn't come to that.

As for the ending, it was good. It's nice to see a happy ending for the main character for once in these stories. Not really much else to say about it besides that.

So i'm going to give two verdicts on this story: one for part 2 and another for thewhole story itself. I'm giving part 2 a 10/10 and the overall story a 10/10. It's a really great creepypasta, has a lot of effort in it, the grammar is great, and i like the ending to it as well. Definitely another solid story.