Thread:Suomynona404/@comment-33290448-20171107001515/@comment-29417957-20171107050956

Your pasta contained the typically overused Lost-Episode cliches of a character in the film being demonic, (like Sonic.exe) breaking the fourth wall, and the footage being made by a serial killer. Because of these cliches, it failed to meet the Quality Standards.

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