Talk:VeggieTales 1993/@comment-39992908-20190701052707

Whilst the grammer, paragraph structuring is good is those are the only saving grases for this story.

This story is cliche as all hell and the ending were the protagonist kills himself at the end is on a whole other level of bullshit.

Final rating 2/10

Threre was an attempt but unfortunatly the cliches made this story fall flat on it's ass.