Talk:Apple's Suicide/@comment-2601:603:4C80:1CF2:6952:C871:BEAD:3FB3-20190603005951

this pasta is really bad, and really cliche. it also copied three creepypasta stories! which is not ok. like writer never do this again, it doesn't make your story like good, and the writers wouldn't like you doing this. trust me. but the grammer looks ok, but writer never copy other stories ok. i really hope you improve from this and turn good.