Thread:Suomynona404/@comment-32509772-20171015183300/@comment-29417957-20171016131629

Your pasta contained overused cliches that made it feel like a Sonic.exe parody.

1. The level is called "Hell.exe."

2. Crash Bandicoot.exe appears with red, bloodshot eyes and bleeding cuts.

3. Your game has you playing against a demon (Lucifer) who kills your character.

Since Sonic.exe is considered a Trollpasta with it's childish horror, any pasta that tries to copy the concept ends up unsuccessful.

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