Talk:The GIR ritual/@comment-43696529-20190914032411

this fucking creepypasta needs to be burnt to the depths of hell where it should never be seen again

my final rating on this piece of shit story: -999/10 no effort, no grammar, no story, its just nothing but fucking gibberish

it looks like something a fucking 7 month old baby would write down and call it fucking scary

and no i will not offend the author of this story because i want that person to learn and become a professional creepyasta writer and improve on writing creepyastas