Talk:Sorry, SpongeBob/@comment-SuperJames9000-20160815170104

This is pretty good. I do think that adding the blood was to much to fit Spongebob. I mean I know this is a creepypasta that should have blood and stuff like that but if you get rid of it the episode fits Spongebob more. I also didn't like how you made Squidward have bloodshot eyes. Overall good story, 9/10