Category talk:Mokey's Show:Darkness/@comment-28370640-20161114234104

Okay, here are my thoughts:

The beginning part sounds like a rip-off combination of "Max and ruby 0004" and "Thomas and the children". However, it did get a TINY BIT oringinal in the actual episode, like how the intro was in G major, however, that is more known as a poopism in YTP's more than considered an actual scary thing. And the line at the end of the episode, "Your life will all be pitch black in a few seconds" sounds kind of rip-offish to "Pingus punishment", and so does the explanation for how the episode was made in some places, like how he started submitting morbid ideas after maybe getting PTSD from his mother dying in some sort of way. Also in the mix was also kind of rip-offish to "Squidwards suicide". I also found it a bit cliche that cailou was talking to the viewer in some way. Also, in my opinion, i think ALL the creepy stuff should stay within the episode, and only a few nightmares should occur thanks to the episode, even though it has been used. So. Many. Times. Overall, this looks like a bunch of lost episode creepypasta's crammed into one, with a turning tables cailou gets grounded goanimate video with bloodshed and murder and other creepy stuff. What do i rate? 2/10, try to be more oringinal next time.