Talk:Angry Sylvester/@comment-JohnThePastaHorse-20170112025849

Okay, this story is pretty bad. I mean, really bad.

For starters, it becomes extrememly confusing at the beginning. So, Cartoon Network was airing an episode of Looney Toons in Hungary, yet it didn't have a Hungarian channel? How does that work? (This part is understandable if they live anywhere else, really, but it's not specified, so it should either be clarified or removed.)

Second, the cliches are just over the top terrible. Like the pupil-less Sylvester, or the creepy cartoon video, the Hungarian narrator, and the window panes with the Crucifix. Oh gosh, that one was bad.

Listen, Cliches aren't ALL bad, but please, remember, Cliches do not help if you pile them high.

Third, the overall story is too short, and it doesn't really flesh itself out very well. It needs more substance, not just, "This was creepy."

I won't say it's good, cause it's not, but it could be. If you need more specifics, let me know.